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he fell in love,
he fell too far.
he thought you shined
like a shooting star.
he tried holding yer hand,
thinking he would save you.
but it looks like this heartbreak
is making a second debut.
he wrote you a messege,
all from the heart.
but the way you replied,
just tore him apart.
even tho its all said,
and its all done.
he still believes theres a reason,
he thought you were the one.
he thinks, breathes, and dreams
of that day you come around,
when you hold his hand and say
"yer love, i have found."
he hides his tears in school,
in daydreams it would show:
"what are you doing?"
"something i should have done a long time ago."

his feelings are a curel teather,
its time you realize we belong together.
©2008-2009 ~BroadwayAve
:iconbroadwayave:

Author's Comments

idkk why, but latleyy ive been doing more poetry,
then drawing ? hahaha. well i made this a couple minutes ago.
its basically the story of my life, for the last couple months.
being stupid, and falling in love with the wrong person.
=/
but whateverrr.
i hope you enjoy (:


poem[c] me!

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:icondannyrocks:
I liked it =) I have a ? how do you make it bold and italic it??

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"Ha ha. What a marsh mellow." ~Taylor Lautner (Jacob Black)

"Oooh Burn!"~Kiowa Gordon (Embry Call)
:iconbroadwayave:
thanks(=
and for bold i did < b > without the spaces.
and italic i did < i > without the spaces.
(:

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live it upp.
drinkkk it downn<3

i still love you.<3
:icondannyrocks:
but where and how did you close it?

Please go on AIM and IM me when I get on please. I want to talk to you.

--
"Ha ha. What a marsh mellow." ~Taylor Lautner (Jacob Black)

"Oooh Burn!"~Kiowa Gordon (Embry Call)
:iconbroadwayave:
put it before what you want bolded or italicized
and then you close it < / b > for bold.
or < / i > for italtics. [without the spaces.]

sureeeeee.

--
live it upp.
drinkkk it downn<3

i still love you.<3
:icondannyrocks:
<hello/i> .......????

--
"Ha ha. What a marsh mellow." ~Taylor Lautner (Jacob Black)

"Oooh Burn!"~Kiowa Gordon (Embry Call)
:iconmrkaosx:
good poem.. i faved that. ^^

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Don't worry about me. I'm just watching.

Iron: Hey Buddy. You got something in your eye! Oh my bad it is just my claw! :evillaugh:
:iconditzii:
awwwwww : D!
thts so cute and sad : )
ur very good at writing poetry : P
:iconbroadwayave:
no helen !
hahahah.
liek say i wanted to say helen in bold.
i would do < b > helen < / b > [wwithout the spaces]
so it comes out helen
you see ?

--
live it upp.
drinkkk it downn<3

i still love you.<3
:iconbroadwayave:
thanksver much(:
<3!

--
live it upp.
drinkkk it downn<3

i still love you.<3

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